The Adamantine Perfection of Desireby Jane Hirshfield
1 Nothing more strong
than to be helpless before desire.
than to be helpless before desire.
No reason,
the simplified heart whispers,
5 the argument over,
only This.
the simplified heart whispers,
5 the argument over,
only This.
No longer choosing anything but assent.
Its bowl scraped clean to the bottom,
the skull-bone cup no longer horrifies,
10 but, rimmed in silver, shines.
the skull-bone cup no longer horrifies,
10 but, rimmed in silver, shines.
A spotted dog follows a bitch in heat.
Gray geese flying past us, crying.
The living cannot help but love the world.
Gray geese flying past us, crying.
The living cannot help but love the world.
1. The author most likely believes that desire is:
a. Insufferable
Not correct, because of the line. " The living cannot help but love the world" (13).
b. Admirable
Not correct, because the tone is not of admiration, it is darker.
c. Impeccable
Not correct, because the tone complains about desire, it does not build it up.
d. Unavoidable
Correct, because of the line, "The living cannot help but love the world" (13).
e. Painful
Not correct, because the author never even mentions pain.
2. Lines 3-6 serve to:
a. Explain that nothing can defeat desire
Not correct, because the text is vague, no explanation.
b. Tell the reader to try to listen to their heart
Not correct, because the author is saying the opposite, to give up.
c. Say that the heart is too weak to fight desire
Not correct, because that isn't the main point.
d. Emphasize that reasoning is the only option
Not correct, because the text says, "No reason" (3).
e. Prove that desire always wins
Correct, because the text says nothing can defeat desire.
3. In the line, “ . . .the skull-bone cup no longer horrifies,” (line 9) the cup most likely represents:
a. Death
Not correct, because death is talked about nowhere else.
b. Goals
Not correct, because the tone is negative so goals wouldn't even make sense.
c. Desire
Correct, because of the invisible subject. The subject is implied.
d. Nightmares
Not correct, because the text isn't about sleep or dreams.
e. Fantasies
Not correct, because the text has a negative tone, not optimistic.
4. The separation of stanzas and usage of punctuation in this poem serves best to:
a. Make the reader stop and think about what is happening
Not correct, because that isn't a strong influence on the poem.
b. Create pauses in the reading
Not correct, because the poem actually has a constant pace.
c. Separate thoughts
Not correct, because it isn't the most important.
d. Lead to a conclusion
Correct, because it keeps the reader reading and builds on itself.
e. Keep a constant pace
Not correct, because it isn't the most important reason for the punctuation.
5. The purpose of this poem is to:
a. Allow the author to express her feelings about desire
Not correct, because she doesn't write in a diary tone.
b. Persuade the reader to give up all hope and submit to desire
Not correct, because the author isn't telling the reader to do anything.
c. Inform the reader that desire conquers all
Not correct, because the poem isn't informative.
d. Show the reader that desire is self-inflicted
Correct, because of the line, "The living cannot help but love the world" (13).
e. Question the actions of society
Not correct, because there are no questions in the poem.
I really enjoyed the poem and saw the connection it has to your author’s works.
ReplyDeleteFor questions 1 I got the correct answer for the same reason you had in your explanation. The words “cannot help” revealed the unavoidable aspect of desire. I also got the correct answer for question 2 because going along with the unavoidable description of desire lines 3-6 serve to show that desire will always rein over other emotions.
Question 4 was helpful for the AP Exam because it dealt with the syntax of the poem which is something I struggle with. Although I got the answer wrong your explanation of it leading to the conclusion helped me understand the syntax of the poem better.